Chapter 3

A smaller framed man next to me reaches out his hand, gesturing to shake mine. “Hi, my name is Gramin.”
“Gramin?”
“Yes.” His eyes are sunken into his head, with dark encircling rings beneath them.
“Noah.”
“Noah, it’s nice to meet you.” His hands fidget nervously as his mouth fumbles over words, “I was just wondering if you weren’t going to eat that, I wouldn’t mind having a little of it.”
“Sure, go ahead.” I slide the dish towards him. Perhaps, his sunken darker features are from over medication, his liver and kidneys stressed from the intoxications. 
Bang. Mr. Burley’s husky hand slams on the table, “That’s my food!”  
“Sorry,” Gramin shyly pulls away as Mr. Burley snatches the food away. I should probably ask him his name, but don’t mind the conversations between us remaining nil.

Chapter 3

 My stomach feels like it has swollen several inches and gurgles as it hardens around the food inside.  A wave of sluggishness consumes my flesh, my eyes flutter as they fight to stay awake but only succumb to the sloshy wave of fatigue.

Excerpt

I squat down near the pots of warm water, feeling the steam rise off.  The steam alone feels remarkably easing to the tension that’s crept into my muscles.  A small rag hangs over the side of one of the pots.  My hand dips the washrag deep into the water, saturating it completely and bringing it to my skin.  Vigorously, I scrub over the length of my body with the drenched cloth, submerging it several times more into the water, saturating it, and scrubbing away the rotten smells permeated into my pores from the prison nights before.  Picking up the pot and tilting it over my head, the water showers over my body.  As the water flows over my body, an unknotting releases from my muscles.  I press my nose against my skin, hints of the smell still linger, but, the unequal factor is far better.
        I throw the new clothing on, it is actually far cleaner than those worn by the residing dwellers beneath here.  Shuffling on the new shoes, obviously previously worn with slightly tattered edges, I slide out of the stall, the hinges creaking as the door swings open.  My feet pace across the concrete, over the same water I just used within the shower stall.  The bathing water trickles towards a narrow five inch groove within the center.  The concave depression runs through the middle of the tunnel, straight through their community where the children play nearby.  



*This excerpt from chapter 10 is one of my favorites and somehow sentimental to me. 

J.L. Maxwell, Author of Unlawful Intrusion: It is a Time...

J.L. Maxwell, Author of Unlawful Intrusion: It is a Time...: "When the mounting ecological, financial, and political problems of today, will be passed down to another generation to hold in their very ha..."
Thanks to everyone who has purchased a copy of the book Unlawful Intrusion. I do hope everyone thoroughly enjoys it. The more that time passes since the completion of the novel, the more I want to go back and add so many more things to it. Perhaps, there will be second edition in the future, with so much more extended things added to it.

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It is a Time...

When the mounting ecological, financial, and political problems of today, will be passed down to another generation to hold in their very hands. 

Excerpt - Chapter 10 - Dwellers

Through the darkness, the man draws closer with his unruly matted hair and overgrown wiry beard reflecting a lion prowling towards an intruding prey in the night, guarding the inhabitants of his pride.  His large dwelling herd stands behind him, frozen at the sight of me.  His feet inch slowly towards me as his eyes barrel down, scanning every inch of me, “Can I help you?”
“Well...”  I trail off, unsure of what to say.  Do I tell the truth?  It’s not like I can tell him I’ve made a wrong turn.  
“Well?”  His feet pause, the end of his beard swaying against his chest. 
My eyes bounce around behind him, a flock of eyes staring back at me.  The mass number of people dress in tattered garments, the ends of their clothing worn with holes, and covered in the filth beneath their feet.  Their appearance shows signs of roughness, as though the events within their lives as hard as sandpaper have scrapped against them, shaping the very texture of their skin.  The structuring of their faces trace deep lines of emotional grievance that look to have penetrated within the deep layers of their features and embedded its emotion permanently upon them.
“I was just walking under here, I didn’t know you were down here and...”
“What are you doing under here?  How did you even get under here?”  Protruding a defensive tone as if ready to protect his territory.
A few whiffs of air inhales upwards into my nostrils, whipping nauseating sensations through my sweltering throat.  My hand shields my facial orifices from the toxic smell of rotting decay.  Are these people living in their own urine and feces?
Attempting to address his previous question without breathing, “There was a cover that was partially built over, I moved it and jumped down.”
A medium built gentleman approaches the wild group leader’s side, his height sliding past the other’s.  “Hi, I’m Jason.”  Jason’s mannerisms show signs of a slight more tolerance towards strangers than the feral roughneck beside him.

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The Concept

There are so many sides to a story.

Presently, within America, there is a lot of talk about constitutional rights and governmental intrusion.  Citizens have become more involved than ever within politics, joining political rallies such as the tea party movement, pushing to cut governmental spending, and staying more current than ever on the administrations every move.  It has become a very interesting time within our country, a time when focus has turned inward, on America herself.

The fears of American citizens today are portrayed within this book, during a time that is representative of the very near future.  A time when the mounting ecological, financial, and political problems of today, will be passed down to another generation to hold in their very hands.

Through this story, Noah faces his fears of the mounting intrusion he feels bound by, leading him on a course of discovery, many would have felt he could  never survive.


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Excerpt from Unlawful Intrusion



Feeling the blood crusted against the side of my face, my hand reaches up, my fingers feeling the swollen pounding knot on my upper head.  

Struggling to sit upwards, the stench hits me.  Human crap, must be years worth of it.  My eyes slowly gaze around, the walls must be over a hundred years old, the color of muddy mildew, and the feel of it as well.  There doesn’t seem to be filtered air in here.  In the corner sits a tarnishing steel toilet.  The room must be no bigger than eight by eight feet, with a small window exposing the outside world.  The cold damp construction brings my thoughts to think that this building must have been built back in the later 1900’s to look and feel like this.  It must have been one of the detention centers that received the funding cuts during the earlier 2000’s.

Weakly, I stand against the wall, stepping onto the bed, my nose lifting above the overhanging lip of the small barred window, peering out.  The cylindrical lightning conductors enlighten the tops of each building with its fluorescent flashing glow streaking brilliant colors above the city top’s night sky.  The sun absorbing skyscrapers tower several stories high against the imprisoning institution, nearly touching it.  Tower after tower of sky scraping buildings, storying over four hundred floors, intertwine and connect with one another with small alleys occasionally separating one from the other.  Some people could travel from their homes, to their food market, to their jobs without ever stepping outside.  Interconnected throughout the city, spiral towering rail systems encased in the same non-reflective solar absorbing alloy, shuttling the mass amounts of inner city dwellers from several points throughout the city of Seattle.  As I peer through the encaging barred window, a single mechanized butterfly flaps its wings, hovering in the air.  Its shimmering wings hold my gaze as if putting me into a slight trance.

“Pst...Pst.”

I crawl down near the rusting bars, onto the cold cemented floor. “Are you calling me?”  Whispering my words to be found on the opposite side of the wall.

“My name is Jay.  What’s yours?”

“Umm...”  What does this guy want. 

“Listen, just do what they tell you to...”

About the Book

“Overseas, I was going along with my country's orders. Now, my acts have brought me against their very commands.”

Set against the booming futuristic ecological developing city of Seattle, Washington, Noah Cason, bears his surroundings with his teeth gritted tightly, hiding his home life and his wife from anyone’s eyes. With regulations governing his every move, he seems unsure if his paranoia has the best of him or if there really are mass amounts of scanning devices continuously recording him, especially the artificial creations he’d like to crack open.

In a land most people would rather not be dwelling in, times have called for drastic measures. Measures that contradict many’s comfortable levels of living.

On his journey to recapture what he values most, Noah uncovers hidden passageways, underground societies, and a multi-level organizational cover-up.